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Ultimate Spiderman: Venom (Alt. story) Part 3

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(This is a rewrite as the last one, well, I accidentally deleted its contents)

    With the symbiote in control, all Peter Parker can do now is watch and regret his earlier actions. Venom actually shrunk and punched the wall its cocoon is stuck to, shattering the cement into pieces with their immense strength. Venom web-swing them back home, to Aunt May's house. "We're safe now," the symbiote consoles.
    Feeling control over his body again, Peter immediately falls to his knees and Venom's "jaws" opened up showing tears streaming down the teen's face. "I shouldn't have kept you that night, I shouldn't had even try to use you to try to find out what happened, I almost killed two people!" Peter lamented. 
    The symbiote on Peter's upper half of his body detached itself and looked back at him, psychically consoling the teen,"It was never intentional Peter, it was a side-effect of our ever growing bond. We pick up the personalities of our host and yours coupled with ours, egged you on, on to do what you did. What happened just now was in self-defense, honest. I'm like a guardian angel, except that I'm bound to you, on a cellular level......"
   
"Wait a minute. Waaaait a minute, why did you just flirt with my current situation and how are you able to talk?" Peter suddenly realized. It can't be sentient, it just can't. It's just a suit, a suit that was made to help cure cancer. It doesn't have the ability to perceive emotions and understand thoughts. Peter, you must be going insane, the teen thought to himself.
    The symbiote formed a symbiote Spiderman in front of the kneeing Peter, helped him up and psychically said,"You're not. We can read your thoughts and mind like an open book, you can't hide anything from us Peter. We became sentient to adapt to our hosts, to understand and develop our bond. We are not to be feared, not to be shunned or underestimated. You helped us to evolve up to this point, you gave us this power, and we are your responsibility, so get your bearings and wake up! This is reality, not a nightmare Peter."
    Meanwhile......
    Eddie Brock and Dr Curt Conners used the last of their fuel to at last burn through the thick symbiotic matter using blowtorches. "Oh no. They've escaped." Was all Eddie Brock could mutter. A few days ago, Peter Parker was his childhood friend, then Peter betrayed him. He took their fathers' work for his own uses. That same night, Peter, under the influence and control of Venom, took the remaining samples of the project to create anti-cancer suit by the father's. Peter came to him the next day, asking for his help. And now, Venom is in control. 
    "Eddie, get a hold of yourself, stop daydreaming. We've got to find Peter before the suit takes them on a rampage or worse," The scientist said as he shook the teen. "Now, where would he go if he is in trouble?"
    "Definitely not anyone close to him, he doesn't want to involve anyone or put them in harm's way unless......"Eddie stopped in his tracks. "Of course! He doesn't need to look them up to get help! We need to hurry to Aunt May Parker's house!" He exclaimed.

[When Peter Parker decided to become Spiderman to protect the people and stop crime, he usually made his gear like web-shooters or re-sew his costume at Aunt May's/his home. Peter also tries not to involve his loved ones in his crime-fighting directly too.]

Back in Peter's room in Aunt May's House......
    "Okay, fine. You were my father's and Eddie's father's anti-cancer suit that became sentient and now you're behaving like some sort symbiote? And you have me for a host and now we are becoming a new entity, so is that all?" Peter inquired. The truth is, he thought the suit was some form of antibiotic of sorts against cancer cells but now, it's sort of declaring its ability to feel, understand and think and the idea that it needs to bond to a host to survive and further that bond to molecular level, that's just so crazy Peter could barely wrap his head around.
    "Well, it's best we discover and explore them later, we sense Eddie and Dr. Conners fast approaching."  The symbiote psychically said as it absorbs its mass back into itself.
    "Peeter, are you home? Peeter, your childhood friend Eddie and a Doctor Conners is looking for you!" Aunt May cried out from the doorway.
    "It's okay Aunt May, invite them up into my room!"Peter said as he absorbed excess symbiotic matter into himself and transform into his casual clothes with hurrying down.
    The two thanked her as they headed to Peter's room with Aunt May's directing. "Pete, what happened just now? Why did you leave?"A worried Eddie asked.
    "It tried to protect me by taking control of my body and escaping back here, it seems to be overprotective of its host - me."The teen replies. "I know I know, how can the suit act on its own without any help I'll explain it." (Peter explains the symbiote's new found abilities etc.) 
    "Wow, there's a lot of unexplained properties in this, um, symbiote that could be caused by other missed out on phenomenons that I would hope I'd get a chance to explore but well, seeing as all of this is new to you, I'm gonna give you two some space to adapt to each other. If you have any updates or questions etc., just look me up at the lab." The eager scientist added.
    "Okay, fine, I trust you with the suit Pete, don't disappoint me,"Eddie said with a sigh.
    Both Dr. Conners and Eddie left the house and everyone went one with their day. Meanwhile, the bond between Peter and the symbiote was truly completed. Peter felt much stronger, more powerful, more alert and his reflexes much better etc. due to the bond being permanent and at a molecular level. While Peter tested his super enhanced abilities and attributes by crime-fighting, they cornered one of the Kingpin's men at an alleyway's dead-end. "There's no way out so pick your poison sir, tell me how did Kingpin pull Sam Bullit's strings and I'll let you go or I'll hand you over to the guys in blue for an interrogation. Either way I'll get the information and if you choose to fight back, I highly doubt you'll win." Spiderman asked. 
    "Okay, okay you got me. I surrender. There's a guy......"The henchman went on.
    "Fine. A deal's a deal, you've got ten seconds, ten, nine......" Spiderman said.
    "Wait, wait, wait, aren't you letting me...... I better run" The henchman hastily said as he got up to run.
    "Five, four, three , two, one, zero, okay time's up." Spiderman says as he shoots web at the henchman's ankles to trip him while web-swinging in front of the man. "Looks like the prey's been caught, I'll drop you off at the blue eagles' nest,"Spidey says as he webs up the henchman and drops him off at the nearest police department.
You've been waiting and waiting and waiting, it's finally out again! Ultimate Spiderman: Venom Part 3! Thursday, November 5th 2015: Well, I took the original one in my gallery out for a re-write update and Sta.sh messed it up, causing me to accidentally delete the story so I decided to re-write another one. The very original draft for part 3 is still in my journals so you can check it out too! Venom overreacts, taking Peter's body out for a spin again, meanwhile, Dr. Conners and Eddie is worried about the symbiote on Peter causing chaos and the bond is completely permanent and on a molecular level! How will Peter deal with this and plus Peter and the symbiote have a moment together.
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nataku27's avatar
I really enjoy the changes you made to this fanfic. The dynamic between the suit and Peter is good. I hope you will let them stay bonded like this.